Here follows the miscues I found:

The title reads, I knew the First Time I Saw Him . . .” “Knew” should be capitalized so it reads, “I Knew the First Time I Saw Him . . .”

The forth heading reads, “Even the best judges of character much take care lest they rush.” It is obvious that the word “much” should be changed to “must.”

The last sentence in the next to last paragraph—that is the paragraph that comes immediately after the heading, “I respect the office; I fear the man, Obama”—has a mistake in it. It reads, “I am afraid of what he has done and I am afraid of he will do to American and her people.” The last part of sentence needs the word “what” so it will read, “. . . and I am afraid of what he will do to America and her people.”

Outside of those minor miscues, you have a fine article there that shows how concerned many Americans are about President Obama. I am hoping he will turn things around and show himself to be a far better, that is, more of a right-of-center, patriotic American who loves his country and wants it to do well.

By all means, I wish him well. It may be that to this point he has been getting OJT (On-the-Job-Training) and now that he sees how wrong-headed many of his choices have been, he will start making more of the right choices. The last few days seem to feed into my hope for him.

God save the president and God bless the United States of America.